ext_109654: (Nimbus)
ext_109654 ([identity profile] rosiphelee.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rosiphelee 2008-09-20 07:47 pm (UTC)

*nods* Good pick. Thanks.

Poor Aylili. She's not prepared for Nimbus in the mornings.

Oh, that language note. So many rewrites. *winces*

Thanks. That looks like over-eagerness with the enter key.

You can keep your health as well as keeping healthy.

She's developing a soft spot for the silly bird, bless her heart.

Nimbus is such an old ham. Poor Aylili is just being a normal teenager for once.

Given some of what I'd found out about Nimbus, Devon and Maria since I first wrote this, it really bothered me that he didn't recognise her. Having the age click there helped with that.

Nimbus obviously missed his calling *imagines him as a member of her own history department* Oh, help.

I use a lot of -t endings in the past tense, even when Words meeps at me for it. That's how I say them and it's an old-fashioned but usually valid spelling.

*hugs* Thank you. Sorry to be so rubbish at replying.

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