into the sudden silence.” <- rogue quotation mark there, me dear. ^-^
“And freeze my ears off while you walk it? Not bloody likely.” <- *grins at Mole* 'e's lovely, 'e is.
Ooooooooooooh. Very curious prologue this. ^-^ And very nice to Lynx as well. ^-^ All before Atlantis and the rest too. Very intruiging. I promise, I'll leave that adjective alone now. Wonderfully intruiging beginning, though.
walked to school[,] but the traffic
Shalini dived towards the corner and Emli yelped and vaulted past her, sliding across four rows of desks to sprawl across the back desk, her ankles hooked through the backs of the chairs. *cackle* <- That sounds so much like our year every class. It's a miracle anyone ever remembered where their seats were...
And that's all I caught for you. This is a lovely beginning. Very interesting to see Azella again and to see how different she became. Always nice to have that happening.
*smiles sheepishly* For all my reading, I still feel like I've only brushed past your characters and worlds. Makes it a bit harder to comment on the stories sensible, but all the more intruiging to read. You've got so much history and story going on... It's inspirational, me dear. ^-^ Absolutely lovely.
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“And freeze my ears off while you walk it? Not bloody likely.” <- *grins at Mole* 'e's lovely, 'e is.
Ooooooooooooh. Very curious prologue this. ^-^ And very nice to Lynx as well. ^-^ All before Atlantis and the rest too. Very intruiging. I promise, I'll leave that adjective alone now. Wonderfully intruiging beginning, though.
walked to school[,] but the traffic
Shalini dived towards the corner and Emli yelped and vaulted past her, sliding across four rows of desks to sprawl across the back desk, her ankles hooked through the backs of the chairs.
*cackle* <- That sounds so much like our year every class. It's a miracle anyone ever remembered where their seats were...
And that's all I caught for you. This is a lovely beginning. Very interesting to see Azella again and to see how different she became. Always nice to have that happening.
*smiles sheepishly* For all my reading, I still feel like I've only brushed past your characters and worlds. Makes it a bit harder to comment on the stories sensible, but all the more intruiging to read. You've got so much history and story going on... It's inspirational, me dear. ^-^ Absolutely lovely.