“You sound like my mother. I’m three hundred and sixty years old.” <- Me annoying and shouldn't be talking, but I think this scene might benefit from a little more description of actions. I like it this way too, but I much prefer a tiny bit of help visualising this. ^-^;
*snickers at the spangle section*
Oooh! Word games! I love word games. 'twas fun. ^-^ Pity to see it stalled, though. Er, not that I should be one to speak. I'm pulling Bitter Sweet through its twelfth rewrite or so. *clears throat* But let's not chatter about that. I like the continuation and the more ordinary setting. I'm with Alyssa on that account. ^-^ It really adds a wonderful depth to your characters and ups the stakes as it is. *smiles* 'Tis like what you said about Superman. Even Tiger has her limits and you show that. Your grasp on her is marvellous, me dear. ^-^
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Date: 2006-08-05 08:21 am (UTC)*snickers at the spangle section*
Oooh! Word games! I love word games. 'twas fun. ^-^ Pity to see it stalled, though. Er, not that I should be one to speak. I'm pulling Bitter Sweet through its twelfth rewrite or so. *clears throat* But let's not chatter about that. I like the continuation and the more ordinary setting. I'm with Alyssa on that account. ^-^ It really adds a wonderful depth to your characters and ups the stakes as it is. *smiles* 'Tis like what you said about Superman. Even Tiger has her limits and you show that. Your grasp on her is marvellous, me dear. ^-^