That was lovely! And even though I haven't read your other things about these three
::hangs head in shame and rushes off to find them now to read later::
it worked very nicely as a self-contained piece - though obviously there was all the foreshadowing and I didn't know how far it connected to your story as well as the Arthurian background... But what a fantastic setting!
(side note - you used to work near Holborn Viaduct? So did I!)
I do like your dialogue (I've probably said this before).
So glad to see the muse is back, even if in a slightly unexpected form. I don't think anyone would object if this was where writing happened for a while...
(side note 2 - though still Arthurian-connected - I owe you a drabble! Check elsewhere and tell me what you'd like - I'm looking forward to having a go ^_^)
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Date: 2006-04-28 10:00 pm (UTC)::hangs head in shame and rushes off to find them now to read later::
it worked very nicely as a self-contained piece - though obviously there was all the foreshadowing and I didn't know how far it connected to your story as well as the Arthurian background... But what a fantastic setting!
(side note - you used to work near Holborn Viaduct? So did I!)
I do like your dialogue (I've probably said this before).
So glad to see the muse is back, even if in a slightly unexpected form. I don't think anyone would object if this was where writing happened for a while...
(side note 2 - though still Arthurian-connected - I owe you a drabble! Check elsewhere and tell me what you'd like - I'm looking forward to having a go ^_^)